Lets be honest there is nothing better then getting rid of gas. After holding in that nasty broiling gas that feels like acid burning holes in your throat. You let it out you don't even stop to think about the fact that you are making the eyes water of the people around you. You know that if you hold it in any longer you might explode.
Bubble of gas
When you let out a burp you have that sensational feeling of the large smelly bubble of gas shouting up your throat. The gas building up then squeezing its way out your mouth. Like sliding a small ring right off your finger you have freed yourself from a trap that can only be resolved by burping.Sound
The loud crisp sound you hear right after you let out the tiny or gigantic burp that just reminds you of the crows chirping, the frogs croaking, and the cute little puppies barking. The large eco that comes bursting out your throat when you burp.
Feel great
That sensational tingling in your throat when you burp. The bubble of gas pounding up your throat. The even better feeling when you have unleashed the beast inside of you. You feel lighter like you can touch the clouds. You have let the polluted air back to where it out of your body. Now that you have burned the nostrils of others you can go back to feeling free.
AWESOME
AWESOME
Great selection of words to use. You did really specific things about burping I don't really burp but when I do it feels just like you explained. Awesome metaphor words for example. Crows chirping, the frogs croaking and cute little puppies barking. I think you should make sure that the ending of your awesome blog ties into your beginning. AWESOME JOB YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB.
ReplyDeleteYour conclusion made me LAUGH!
ReplyDeleteThroughout your post you used creative language to make your topic come to life.
Very well done!
A next step would be to add some of the science behind burping!